{"id":992,"date":"2013-09-17T17:19:02","date_gmt":"2013-09-17T17:19:02","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/?p=992"},"modified":"2013-09-17T17:19:02","modified_gmt":"2013-09-17T17:19:02","slug":"ariel-lawhon-on-premise-plot-and-pacing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/?p=992","title":{"rendered":"Ariel Lawhon on Premise, Plot and Pacing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>\n<w:WordDocument>\n<w:View>Normal<\/w:View>\n<w:Zoom>0<\/w:Zoom>\n<w:PunctuationKerning\/>\n<w:ValidateAgainstSchemas\/>\n<w:SaveIfXMLInvalid>false<\/w:SaveIfXMLInvalid>\n<w:IgnoreMixedContent>false<\/w:IgnoreMixedContent>\n<w:AlwaysShowPlaceholderText>false<\/w:AlwaysShowPlaceholderText>\n<w:Compatibility>\n<w:BreakWrappedTables\/>\n<w:SnapToGridInCell\/>\n<w:WrapTextWithPunct\/>\n<w:UseAsianBreakRules\/>\n<w:DontGrowAutofit\/>\n<\/w:Compatibility>\n<w:BrowserLevel>MicrosoftInternetExplorer4<\/w:BrowserLevel>\n<\/w:WordDocument>\n<\/xml><![endif]--><\/p>\n<p><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>\n<w:LatentStyles DefLockedState=\"false\" LatentStyleCount=\"156\">\n<\/w:LatentStyles>\n<\/xml><![endif]--><!--[if !mso]><object classid=\"clsid:38481807-CA0E-42D2-BF39-B33AF135CC4D\" id=ieooui><\/object>\n\n\n\n<style>\nst1\\:*{behavior:url(#ieooui) }\n<\/style>\n\n<![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 10]>\n\n\n\n<style>\n \/* Style Definitions *\/\n table.MsoNormalTable\n\t{mso-style-name:\"Table Normal\";\n\tmso-tstyle-rowband-size:0;\n\tmso-tstyle-colband-size:0;\n\tmso-style-noshow:yes;\n\tmso-style-parent:\"\";\n\tmso-padding-alt:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt;\n\tmso-para-margin:0in;\n\tmso-para-margin-bottom:.0001pt;\n\tmso-pagination:widow-orphan;\n\tfont-size:10.0pt;\n\tfont-family:\"Times New Roman\";\n\tmso-ansi-language:#0400;\n\tmso-fareast-language:#0400;\n\tmso-bidi-language:#0400;}\n<\/style>\n\n<![endif]--><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"color: #993300;\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;\">Part III highlighting the 2013 Decatur Book Festival Writers Conference<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\"><a href=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/ArielLawhon.jpeg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-full wp-image-994\" alt=\"ArielLawhon\" src=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/ArielLawhon.jpeg\" width=\"256\" height=\"256\" srcset=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/ArielLawhon.jpeg 256w, https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/ArielLawhon-150x150.jpeg 150w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 256px) 100vw, 256px\" \/><\/a>Today, <i style=\"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;\">The Writing Well<\/i> concludes its three-part recap of the 2013 Decatur Book Festival Writers Conference with author Ariel Lawhon, co-founder of the online book club, She Reads, whose debut novel, <i style=\"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;\">The Wife, The Maid and the Mistress,<\/i> will be published in January.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\">The mother of four admits that she is addicted to research (\u201cFor me, it\u2019s a way to procrastinate,\u201d) she teased the audience. Her highly engaging talk covered the three Ps of writing: premise, plot and pacing.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\">How do you define premise? It\u2019s \u201cyour story described in one line.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\">Why is it so important, you may ask?<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\">Ariel noted that it\u2019s the seed from which your story grows, explaining that creating a strong premise line helps you focus on your story and also to quickly explain it to anyone, whether it be a journalist, an agent or a publisher.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\">\u201cWriting a premise line forces you to think about the most important parts of your story &#8212; what is the story about? What does she do? What happens in the end?<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>You can\u2019t really move forward unless you know this. You know your story innately so you\u2019re not wandering.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\"><a href=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/TheWifeTheMaidThe-Mistress.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-995 alignleft\" alt=\"TheWife,TheMaid,The Mistress\" src=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/TheWifeTheMaidThe-Mistress.jpg\" width=\"300\" height=\"453\" srcset=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/TheWifeTheMaidThe-Mistress.jpg 300w, https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/TheWifeTheMaidThe-Mistress-198x300.jpg 198w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a>Ariel shared her own premise line for <i style=\"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;\">The Wife, The Maid, and the Mistress<\/i>: \u201cMy story is about three women who know the truth about a judge and they choose not to tell,\u201d said Ariel.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\">Set in New York City, her novel reconstructs one of America\u2019s most famous unsolved mysteries \u2013 the disappearance of Justice Joseph Crater in 1930 \u2013 as seen through the eyes of the three women who knew him best. On a sultry summer night, as rumors circulated about the judge\u2019s involvement in wide-scale political corruption, Judge Crater stepped into a cab and vanished without a trace.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\">Ariel offered a simple formula for creating a strong Premise line:<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0\u00a0 <\/span>Character + Action = Outcome, and then shared three contemporary examples:<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"margin-left: .5in; text-indent: -.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list .5in;\"><span style=\"font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-font-family: Tahoma;\"><span style=\"mso-list: Ignore;\">&#8211;<span style=\"font: 7.0pt 'Times New Roman';\">\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 <\/span><\/span><\/span><i style=\"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;\">The Godfather<\/i>: \u201cThe youngest son of a Mafia family (character) takes revenge on men who shot his father (action) and becomes the new Godfather (outcome).\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"margin-left: .5in; text-indent: -.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list .5in;\"><span style=\"font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-font-family: Tahoma;\"><span style=\"mso-list: Ignore;\">&#8211;<span style=\"font: 7.0pt 'Times New Roman';\">\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 <\/span><\/span><\/span><i style=\"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;\">Harry Potter<\/i>: \u201cA boy discovers he has magical powers and attends a school for magicians.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"margin-left: .5in; text-indent: -.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1; tab-stops: list .5in;\"><span style=\"font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-font-family: Tahoma;\"><span style=\"mso-list: Ignore;\">&#8211;<span style=\"font: 7.0pt 'Times New Roman';\">\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 <\/span><\/span><\/span><i style=\"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;\">The Help<\/i>: \u201cThree women write a book about domestic servitude and expose a system of racism.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\"><a href=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/JohnTrubyAnatomyofStory.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-full wp-image-1000\" alt=\"JohnTrubyAnatomyofStory\" src=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/JohnTrubyAnatomyofStory.jpg\" width=\"183\" height=\"275\" \/><\/a>Ariel then addressed plot \u2013 defined as what happens in your book.<span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span>A good novel, she noted, must include seven structural components. These key steps of story structure, from John Truby\u2019s <i style=\"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;\">The Anatomy of Story<\/i>, are:<\/p>\n<ol style=\"margin-top: 0in;\" start=\"1\" type=\"1\">\n<li><strong><span style=\"color: #993300;\">Weakness<\/span><\/strong> \u2013 hero cannot be perfect; he must be hurting someone at the beginning of the book<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"mso-list: l1 level1 lfo2; tab-stops: list .5in;\"><strong><span style=\"color: #993300;\">Desire<\/span><\/strong> \u2013 what your hero wants<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"mso-list: l1 level1 lfo2; tab-stops: list .5in;\"><strong><span style=\"color: #993300;\">Opponent<\/span><\/strong> \u2013 the person who keeps your hero from reaching his goal<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"mso-list: l1 level1 lfo2; tab-stops: list .5in;\"><strong><span style=\"color: #993300;\">Plan<\/span><\/strong> \u2013 how the hero goes about achieving his goal<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"mso-list: l1 level1 lfo2; tab-stops: list .5in;\"><span style=\"color: #993300;\"><strong>Battle<\/strong><\/span> \u2013 the final conflict between hero and opponent<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"mso-list: l1 level1 lfo2; tab-stops: list .5in;\"><span style=\"color: #993300;\"><strong>Self Revelation<\/strong><\/span> \u2013 when the hero sees his moral weakness<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"mso-list: l1 level1 lfo2; tab-stops: list .5in;\"><span style=\"color: #993300;\"><strong>New Equilibrium<\/strong><\/span> \u2013 when the hero returns to normal \u2013 but changed &#8211; his desire achieved<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0<\/span>A story\u2019s plot creates a lot of different questions. Pacing, advised Ariel, is the rate in which you answer those questions for your reader. A great guidepost for pacing? Begin your scenes with a bang and end them with a cliffhanger to keep your readers off guard, Ariel said.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\">\u201cThe key to pacing is that as soon as you answer one question, you need to ask another so the story doesn\u2019t sag and the reader is motivated to keep reading,\u201d she added. All the small questions must be connected to the big question.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\">\u201cIt\u2019s all about withholding \u2013 parceling out information in small pieces,\u201d she said.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\"><a href=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/game-of-thrones-season-4.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-full wp-image-999\" alt=\"game-of-thrones-season-4\" src=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/game-of-thrones-season-4.jpg\" width=\"279\" height=\"175\" srcset=\"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/game-of-thrones-season-4.jpg 1920w, https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/game-of-thrones-season-4-300x187.jpg 300w, https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/game-of-thrones-season-4-1024x640.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/game-of-thrones-season-4-624x390.jpg 624w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 279px) 100vw, 279px\" \/><\/a>During the Q&amp;A, she fielded questions such as \u201cIs there such a thing as too much conflict?\u201d She cited George R.R. Martin\u2019s fantasy epic, <i style=\"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;\">Game of Thrones<\/i> as an example of a story with a lot of conflict among a huge cast of characters.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\">\u201cConflict has to be planned. It\u2019s important when writing to be very specific with who is in conflict and why,\u201d she concluded.<\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0<\/span><i style=\"mso-bidi-font-style: normal;\"><span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0 <\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"mso-spacerun: yes;\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n ","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Part III highlighting the 2013 Decatur Book Festival Writers Conference Today, The Writing Well concludes its three-part recap of the 2013 Decatur Book Festival Writers Conference with author Ariel Lawhon,<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":5,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[13,66,7],"tags":[701,696,311,703,706,705,702,704],"class_list":["post-992","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-author-interview","category-writing-conferences","category-writing-tips","tag-ariel-lawhon","tag-decatur-book-festival-writers-conference","tag-historical-fiction","tag-pacing-in-novel","tag-the-maid-and-the-mistress","tag-the-wife","tag-writing-plot","tag-writing-premise-line"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/992","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/5"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=992"}],"version-history":[{"count":6,"href":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/992\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1002,"href":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/992\/revisions\/1002"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=992"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=992"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/anne.myupcomingsite.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=992"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}